Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 Prompt Response: The changes I made to my writing was my evidence. I had to make changes because of the point of view I was talking from.

Summary: Today in class we work on a worksheet

Reflection: I learned to distribute my time evenly

Mar5th 

 

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